Heart of Shadow Ch 19 Draft Progress
Well, I have a rough draft for Chapter 19 of Heart of Shadow now. At 4365 words, it's already a quite respectable length. I might edit any part of it, but the part with Palpatine is the one I want to edit most. This chapter is, at its core, mostly a 'setting things up' chapter, but I was able to liven it up a bit, and introduce some more plot points.
Mostly I just want to poke Palpatine into doing something a bit more here, because his section gets very thinky and if I can replace some of the thinkiness with plot-relevant actions, I think it will be good for the story. I enjoy writing ruminations, but I have *a lot* of ground to cover here so I need to make sure I'm progressing the story to have any reasonable hope of covering the many, many plot points I have in mind.
After all, the story is starts during the events in the Darth Plagueis novel but isn't going to end until The Revenge of the Sith time period. Which is...a lot of ground to cover! And after this Vidar subplot, I'm not even sure how many of the other subplots will end up being based on the ones in the Darth Plagueis novel. The subplot I'm writing with Plagueis now certainly isn't. By the time the TPM time period rolls around the gffa in this AU is obviously going to be extremely divergent from the canon.
Speaking of the Plagueis subplot, that's probably my favorite part of this chapter. It's going to be challenging to finish, I suspect, but it also has a lot of elements I greatly enjoy.
Mostly I just want to poke Palpatine into doing something a bit more here, because his section gets very thinky and if I can replace some of the thinkiness with plot-relevant actions, I think it will be good for the story. I enjoy writing ruminations, but I have *a lot* of ground to cover here so I need to make sure I'm progressing the story to have any reasonable hope of covering the many, many plot points I have in mind.
After all, the story is starts during the events in the Darth Plagueis novel but isn't going to end until The Revenge of the Sith time period. Which is...a lot of ground to cover! And after this Vidar subplot, I'm not even sure how many of the other subplots will end up being based on the ones in the Darth Plagueis novel. The subplot I'm writing with Plagueis now certainly isn't. By the time the TPM time period rolls around the gffa in this AU is obviously going to be extremely divergent from the canon.
Speaking of the Plagueis subplot, that's probably my favorite part of this chapter. It's going to be challenging to finish, I suspect, but it also has a lot of elements I greatly enjoy.