Palpatine Scene Rewrite
Oct. 5th, 2021 12:16 amSo I wrote a new scene for Palpatine in this chapter of Heart of Shadow, and it works much better with the plot, so I plan for it to replace all or most of the previous one. Only I really, really like certain parts of the previous scene, so now I'm just trying to figure out if I can somehow cram those parts into this chapter, too. Regardless, I plan to save them because they greatly amuse me, and my thinking is that even if I can't fit them in here, maybe I can fit them somewhere else.