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The audience for Heart of Shadow is people who like redemption stories. This is the big one in terms of audience requirements here: if a person hates redemption stories, this is probably not the story for them. A lot of the other stuff in this story is incidental and could have been changed without significantly changing the story, but not the redemption part. It's not the same story without that.

Given the above, it's perhaps not surprising that the story is also very villain focused--this is a common thread in my stories. I love to write about villains.

Furthermore, while there are a lot of redemption stories in the Star Wars fandom, I believe the vast majority of them are focused on Darth Vader. It's also common for redemption stories to focus on the 'less evil' villains. 

This is not that kind of redemption story. This is focused on Palpatine and Plagueis. And they're the worst. The worst of the worst. That's the point. I don't feel like it's much of a redemption story if the villain is just misunderstood.

Lastly, to me redemption is about a character actually doing something to help repair the damage they've done and make the world a better place. It's not about being sad or mopey enough for their victims to forgive them. 

This story also has a Sidious/Talzin romance, so if a person doesn't like romance, that could potentially be an issue. It could also be an issue if the person is incredibly averse to that specific pairing for whatever reason. It's also kind of a rarepair (to my knowledge I am the only person particularly invested in this pairing), so I don't expect it to be an actual draw for most people.

Hmmmm...what else? This story does have quite a bit of...I guess you could call it humor, however, it is not intended to be a solely humorous story. It is also not intended to be a comedy or parody. Some scenes may be inappropriate for those averse to satire. Okay...maybe quite a few scenes.

You will encounter politics in this story, both of the specifically Star Wars variety and those referencing real life. You have been warned.

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Just re-read the last chapter I've written so far for my Heart of Shadow fic and had a lot of fun reading it. It's Plagueis just being Plagueis (or rather, Hego Damask), and Dooku and Qui-Gon affectionately bickering with each other and not so affectionately bickering with Plagueis.

I love the secret identity aspect of the Sith. It's so fun to play around with that kind of character, and think about how the different facets of their personality, even the ones that are pure artifice, bleed into each other. A person is not their mask, but the kinds of masks a person chooses does say something about them. I actually think Plagueis wears two masks--the mask he shows the world, of a mundane businessman, and the mask he presents to Palpatine and himself, the mask of someone who both desires power and has the wisdom necessary to obtain it. Which is to say, the mask of the dutiful Sith Lord.

I don't think Plagueis, and that includes canon Plagueis, is very good at, or particularly motivated by, the things that are supposed to motivate a 'good' Sith Lord. Which is not to say that I think he doesn't want power or the destruction of the Jedi, because I think he wants both of those things. It's not to say that I think canon Plagueis can't be as cold as the frozen world he grew up on. But I think what Plagueis wants most is the personal freedom to pursue knowledge for the sake of knowledge, and companionship. 

He was slow to kill his own Master and he wanted to rule over the galaxy for eternity with Sidious. If that isn't the essence of 'best friends forever' (forever!) I don't know what is. And of course he botched that up real good because he also never properly learned how to respect someone rather than try to dominate them. Like Sidious would never have accepted that scenario and Plagueis was a fool to think he would. Like thinking that a man that murdered his own father because he resented the authority that was exerted over him was ever ever ever going to accept a situation where someone else could exert power over him for infinity forever is just the height of hubris, but that's part of what I love about Plagueis so much.

And I also love that for Plagueis political power and the destruction of the Jedi are just kind of secondary to what he really cares about, which are his terrible little experiments. Love that the Darth Plagueis novel recontextualizes Palpatine saying that Plagueis could save the ones he cared about from dying into meaning that he could bring his science experiments back to life.

And I love getting to examine the relationship between Dooku and Qui-Gon in my story when Dooku was still a Jedi. Tales of the Jedi was just so boring in how it portrayed Dooku (also in how it portrayed Mace Windu, but that probably deserves its own essay) and particularly his relationship to Qui-Gon. Like he's practically a Sith already in that cartoon. There's no attempt to show, like, any actual significant shift in who he is as a person in his transition from Jedi to Sith. Anyway when I was writing this chapter, I had a lot of fun showing Dooku and Qui-Gon's dynamic with each other, how they're both similarly stubborn but also their very different approaches to problems and to life in general.

Anyway, it was fun to reread the chapter and think about all these characters again.

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Sometimes I just crave a character who expresses their enthusium for science with horrific science experiments. And that's why Darth Plagueis is one of my favorite characters.  No pretension of ethical integrity, just all of that starry-eyed fascination with discovering how things work while coldly stabbing people to death. I feel like if Plagueis had become Emperor, he'd be doing a weekly science show. Like one of those shows where the goal is clearly to educate young children and inculate them in the joys of science, but he starts each episode by, like, stabbing someone in heart or something. Then he's like 'Welcome, welcome, to another episode of Mysterious Biology! Today we'll examine this intriguing specimen's midichlorians as they slowly drain out of him. Can you say midi-clor-ians? They're the powerhouse of the cell...'
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The Darth Plagueis novel gives a lot of background on the Sith, and one detail we learn from it is how Darth Maul becomes a Sith.  And how that happens is that his mother Kycina gives him away to Palpatine as an infant.  Here's the scene in the novel where this is explained:

“Clearly I am not, as I suspect you have already intuited. But you still haven’t answered my question. Why are trying to rid yourself of the infant?”
“To spare the one for the sake of the other,” she said after a moment. “Half a clan pair, this one is. And I want one to live freely, since the other can’t.”
“Who poses the threat?”
“Talzin is her name.”
“Who is Talzin?”
“The Nightsister Mother.”
Palpatine filed the information away. “Where is the infant’s father?”
“Dead—by tradition.”
He snorted. “Will the infant not be missed?”
“Talzin knows only of the one, not the other.”
“You delude yourself.”
Gently, she pushed the shoulder bag toward him. “Then take him. Please.”
“What would I do with him?”
“This one is strong in the Force. In the right hands, he can become a powerful asset.”
“Servitude of a different sort.”
She ignored the remark. “Take him. Save him.”
Palpatine regarded the newborn again. “Have you named him?”
“Maul, he is called.”

Of course Palpatine is the worst parent ever, so Maul never really gets the life his mother wanted for him.  Maul is unusual in that he's the only known Rule of Two Sith who was explicitly raised to be one from infancy.  Which is a pretty horrific childhood to imagine.  This seems like a pretty tragic situation to me, because it sounds like either way his life was going to be pretty awful.  

One thing I noticed reading this over again is that Maul is supposed to be half of a clan pair.  So is that supposed to mean he has a twin?  Who knows?  That never comes up again in this novel.  I guess if you wanted to tie this into The Clone Wars continuity you could say that the twin was supposed to be Savage, though my understanding is that when that character was first conceived, he wasn't intended to have anything to do with Maul.  At the same time, given when this was written and the fact that Legends EU often tied in things from other stories, I'm guessing that probably was the intent.

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We Sith are an unseen opposition, Tenebrous had told his young apprentice. A phantom menace. Where the Sith once wore armor, we now wear cloaks. But the Force works through us all the more powerfully in our invisibility. For the present, the more covert we remain, the more influence we can have. Our revenge will be achieved not through subjugation but by contagion.

--from the Darth Plagueis novel by James Luceno

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So, I just wanted to write down some thoughts I had relating to this brief passage in the Darth Plagueis novel:

Years would pass before Nome found Hego's mother, whom he had conscripted not as an apprentice-for she wasn't strong enough in the Force--but as a disciple...

I have a headcanon about Plagueis's mother, which is that she wasn't actually weak in the Force.  The Sith are just always trying to get the most powerful Force users they can find, so Tenebrous was just like 'what if apprentice like this one But Even More Powerful' and he was also  just specifically inclined to go the Build-A-Sith route.   So when he saw an opportunity he took it.  And that's why he had Plagueis created.   Because the Sith are just like that.  But if sadly unnamed mother muun was really that weak in the Force, I don't think she would have been accepted as any kind of Sith, apprentice or not, to begin with.  If we look at the sheer number of apprentice candidates Venemis had stored on his computer (whom Plagueis subsequently offed), it seems that the Sith have their ways of finding other powerful Force users even when they're not Jedi.  This makes sense because otherwise they'd have trouble keeping their Limited Edition Baneite Sith line going, especially seeing as since most of them actually don't appear to be fallen Jedi, so they must be finding these non-Jedi Force users somehow.

The Sith probably also have a higher cutoff than the Jedi for what they consider 'not very powerful' since there are so few of them so every individual is kind of expected to be ridiculously powerful.  And if we look at Palpatine, who ended up choosing a Jedi who was also The Most Powerful Force User Alive for his apprentice, we notice that in canon he had little interest in turning Obi-Wan, who was considered quite powerful as Jedi went (in contrast to Dooku, who also had clear personal reasons for his preference).

Which brings me to my headcanon that Plagueis's mother was about as powerful as Obi-Wan Kenobi.  Of course I have no textual evidence for this, but there's also nothing in the text that explicitly disproves it, and as I've explained above, a lot of reasons to think that this is also not inconsistent with the canon either.

I might end up using this idea in one or more of my stories in some way, so I wanted to write it down.  I also don't think it's very spoilery, so I'm not particularly averse to revealing it in advance.

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Am writing chapter 21 of Heart of Shadow. And I know I always say this, but this is such a fun chapter for me. This is a Plagueis-centered chapter, though my new POV character, Dooku, also features heavily in this chapter. I always choose protagonists based on how much I enjoy their characters, and Plagueis is definitely one of my favorites. Love this Science Sith, and love seeing him decide he's going to be a problem for some Jedi haha.
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Enjoyed writing another Plagueis scene recently.  He's so much fun to write.  I've written a couple scenes for chapter 19, but even though they were fun to write, I don't feel enough happens in them yet.  They're mostly just 'setting things up' kind of scenes, and while I've enjoyed writing them, I want something a little more substantive to happen.

Hmmm, actually, I just got an idea for something like that I could add here.
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This is, I feel, a truly quality enemies-to-lovers pairing. 

Please allow me to explain.

See, Plagueis hates the midichlorians because he feels like they're in the way of him directly accessing the Force and utilizing his full abilities.  So he's like 'listen up, you little parasites, I'm going to destroy you and obtain unlimited power muahahaha' but of course he has to research them to do so.

So he gets all his fancy little microscopes and gazes at his tiny foes for hours on end and scribbles out countless little sketches of them and fills datapads with notes on them.

And prints out full-color photographs of them, which he lies awake all night with on his pillow while muttering 'my nemeses'. 

What more could one want?

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Was thinking about a different format for the "have you ever heard the legend of Darth Plagueis the Wise..." speech if it was converted to some sort of tacky Holonet ad.  I'm thinking it would say something like 'Sith Lord learns this one weird trick to create life and save the ones he cares about from dying.  Jedi hate him!'
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I was thinking about Sith lightsaber crystals and about what Plagueis' lightsaber crystal would be like.  I've decided that, unlike the vast majority of lightsaber crystals, a.) it is a perfect cube shape and b.) he made it in like 45 minutes in his easy bake Sith crystal oven.  The oven was made by Tenebrous to show off his engineering skills.  Might stick this idea in my Heart of Shadow fic at some point in the future.
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So I've now seen more than one 'Rush Clovis was raised by Darth Plagueis' post and while I'm always down for speculation about Star Wars characters I do have to wonder why this is surfacing now? As far as I can tell, it's all based on stuff that's been known since The Clone Wars Season 6. It seems none of the materials actually confirms the muun banker who adopted him was Plagueis specifically, so that's just speculation. Maybe it's just because more people know about Clovis since he was in the recent Padme novel? Or maybe because people are rewatching the old episodes from TCW after season 7 was released?

I actually have a different backstory for Clovis that I use in my Cut Strings story, so I'm sticking with that regardless of what canon or fanon does, but it's always interesting to me to see what's going on in the Star Wars Darth Plagueis fandom.
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I have this sudden desire to see Darth Plagueis in one of those old-time plague masks.  How could I tell it's him if his entire face is covered?  Because of the highly questionable science experiments he is conducting while practicing his lightsaber forms, that's how.

Maybe I will try to draw this.  Doubt it would turn out very professional-looking, but it might be fun.  Tenebrous scolding Plagueis to pay attention to his lightsaber practice optional (but potentially amusing addition).
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I should have put Plagueis/Midichlorians as a pairing for Star Wars Rare Pairs. Maybe next time.
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Plagueis/Midichlorians is the OTP for me lol. It could even be enemies to lovers because Plagueis maintains he wants to get rid of midichlorians but like practically all of his weird evil science is about midichlorians. I can only imagine how many lectures about 'the powerhouse of the Force' that Palpatine had to sit through haha!
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