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The Sith are kind of inherently edgy, but that doesn't mean that all the Sith are edgy to the same degree. So, time to rate them by how much they exemplify the Sith trait of edginess. For this I will be using my very scientific Edge Factor metric. So let's get started:

Darth Sidious: 6/10. Not a maximally edgelord aesthetic. Spends much of his life pretending to be an inoccuous good guy, which is diabolical but not edgy. Also by the time his aesthetic becomes more edgy, he's well established as an authority figure, which is not a particularly edgy role. Edgelords are more about tragic rebellion than ruling: so in this respect Sidious is a victim of his own success. All of *his* rebellions were successful, which *is* tragic, but not for him.

Darth Tyrannus: 4/10. Look, cut him some slack, he's not used to this Sith stuff. Still, he does have that tragic rebellion thing going for him re: the Jedi and Yoda.

Darth Plagueis: 5/10. Leave him alone, he just wants to do his evil science. Scalpels are edgy, right? Anyway surely he can just delegate the edginess to his apprentice? He wants to get back to his experiments. Little too much authority for the necessary rebelliousness, and takes *forever* to rebel against Tenebrous, though he does try to (unsuccessfully) end the rule of two.

Darth Maul: 10/10. Someone understood the assignment. Classy all black attire. Single earring. Double-bladed lightsaber. Rebels against Sidious multiple times, but never vanquishes him. Dies tragically trying to get revenge. Maximum edge.

Darth Vader: 8/10. Solid edge aesthetic and history of tragic rebellion, but gets points deducted for position of authority in the Empire.

Darth Bane: 8/10. A little too successful so gets a deduction for that, but the aesthetic and rebellion are *off the charts*. Guy rebelled against his father, the Jedi, *and* the Sith. Not to mention the face tattoos and invincibility beetles have incredible edge energy.

Darth Zannah: 8/10. Again, too successful for maximum edge, but solid aesthetic with the face tattoos, plenty of rebellion, and a tragic willingness to sacrifice her closest relative for her ambitions all makes her Edge Factor competitive.
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The audience for Heart of Shadow is people who like redemption stories. This is the big one in terms of audience requirements here: if a person hates redemption stories, this is probably not the story for them. A lot of the other stuff in this story is incidental and could have been changed without significantly changing the story, but not the redemption part. It's not the same story without that.

Given the above, it's perhaps not surprising that the story is also very villain focused--this is a common thread in my stories. I love to write about villains.

Furthermore, while there are a lot of redemption stories in the Star Wars fandom, I believe the vast majority of them are focused on Darth Vader. It's also common for redemption stories to focus on the 'less evil' villains. 

This is not that kind of redemption story. This is focused on Palpatine and Plagueis. And they're the worst. The worst of the worst. That's the point. I don't feel like it's much of a redemption story if the villain is just misunderstood.

Lastly, to me redemption is about a character actually doing something to help repair the damage they've done and make the world a better place. It's not about being sad or mopey enough for their victims to forgive them. 

This story also has a Sidious/Talzin romance, so if a person doesn't like romance, that could potentially be an issue. It could also be an issue if the person is incredibly averse to that specific pairing for whatever reason. It's also kind of a rarepair (to my knowledge I am the only person particularly invested in this pairing), so I don't expect it to be an actual draw for most people.

Hmmmm...what else? This story does have quite a bit of...I guess you could call it humor, however, it is not intended to be a solely humorous story. It is also not intended to be a comedy or parody. Some scenes may be inappropriate for those averse to satire. Okay...maybe quite a few scenes.

You will encounter politics in this story, both of the specifically Star Wars variety and those referencing real life. You have been warned.

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Poll #29581 Palpatine's Speeder Repair: Expanded Version
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Chancellor Palpatine's speeder breaks down. Does he:

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I once heard about there being a discarded idea for the original trilogy that the Emperor wasn't evil and it was actually just like, his advisors and and such who were evil (and Darth Vader, obviously).

Now, I think this would have been a terrible idea, and substantially worse than what Lucas actually ended up going with, but it gave me an idea that does interest me.

What if Palpatine was exactly the same, but if, because of the enormously positive propagranda for him during the Clone Wars, and because he had and has a lot of charisma, there were people who thought that he was actually a good guy. Like "oh, Palpatine's the best leader we ever had, such a good and brave man--this Empire business must all be Mas Amedda's fault" or something like that.

Obviously people like Obi-Wan and Yoda would know, but very few other people would have.  Obi-Wan's message doesn't even explain why the Republic became the Empire, so it's possible that even some Jedi might not have worked out that it was Palpatine himself who had it in for them, and not someone else who was advising him.  It might even be that some of the Jedi who became  Inquisitors came to him willingly because they thought they could fix things if they 'rescued' him from the Sith who must be holding him hostage or something.  It seems that not many people knew that Darth Vader was Anakin Skywalker, or that Palpatine was a Sith himself.  Even after he offed the Jedi, Palpatine seemed to prefer to perpetuate the subterfuge that he was just an ordinary guy and not a Sith Lord.  So only select people in the Empire would likely know the truth.

I just think that could be an interesting twist, for example if some of the Neo-Republicans in the Rebellion think they can fix the issue by appealing to Palpatine and it's the Separatists in the secret Rebel meeting who have to be like, no, that sounds like the worst idea ever.  Or what if Luthen had to be like "Oh, yet another Rebel cell that wants to try to 'rescue' the Emperor again.  Can I afford to tell them that won't work?"

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The Darth Plagueis novel gives a lot of background on the Sith, and one detail we learn from it is how Darth Maul becomes a Sith.  And how that happens is that his mother Kycina gives him away to Palpatine as an infant.  Here's the scene in the novel where this is explained:

“Clearly I am not, as I suspect you have already intuited. But you still haven’t answered my question. Why are trying to rid yourself of the infant?”
“To spare the one for the sake of the other,” she said after a moment. “Half a clan pair, this one is. And I want one to live freely, since the other can’t.”
“Who poses the threat?”
“Talzin is her name.”
“Who is Talzin?”
“The Nightsister Mother.”
Palpatine filed the information away. “Where is the infant’s father?”
“Dead—by tradition.”
He snorted. “Will the infant not be missed?”
“Talzin knows only of the one, not the other.”
“You delude yourself.”
Gently, she pushed the shoulder bag toward him. “Then take him. Please.”
“What would I do with him?”
“This one is strong in the Force. In the right hands, he can become a powerful asset.”
“Servitude of a different sort.”
She ignored the remark. “Take him. Save him.”
Palpatine regarded the newborn again. “Have you named him?”
“Maul, he is called.”

Of course Palpatine is the worst parent ever, so Maul never really gets the life his mother wanted for him.  Maul is unusual in that he's the only known Rule of Two Sith who was explicitly raised to be one from infancy.  Which is a pretty horrific childhood to imagine.  This seems like a pretty tragic situation to me, because it sounds like either way his life was going to be pretty awful.  

One thing I noticed reading this over again is that Maul is supposed to be half of a clan pair.  So is that supposed to mean he has a twin?  Who knows?  That never comes up again in this novel.  I guess if you wanted to tie this into The Clone Wars continuity you could say that the twin was supposed to be Savage, though my understanding is that when that character was first conceived, he wasn't intended to have anything to do with Maul.  At the same time, given when this was written and the fact that Legends EU often tied in things from other stories, I'm guessing that probably was the intent.

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I actually rather dislike Kylo Ren as a character, but I think it was fortuitous that I found my post about him and Sheev on the same day the final TROS trailer dropped.  It may seem strange for someone to say a character they dislike is similar to one of their favorites, but I certainly don't enjoy Palpatine because I think he's a good guy, and I certainly don't dislike Kylo for merely being a villain.  There's a very significant amount of arbitary aesthetics involved in getting me to like a character, and Kylo just doesn't really check those boxes for me whereas Palpatine very definitively does.  

I'm really excited by their actual juxtaposition in this film, though, which is something I never dreamed would happen when I wrote that post over a year ago.  I'm not sure if the film will actually highlight the similarity of the two characters, but there's certainly an incredible opportunity for it being presented here.  I mean, I just really want to see these two characters interact or be compared in some way.

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